Lady Business

I know exactly what you mean, as my language fails me when asked to say exactly why a different kind of language style feels right or not. I think we'd need to have some kind of linguist background (eytomology, or somehing that spend a lot of time looking at syllables) to be able to describe it fully.

Yes though, so many good ideas in here. I'm interested to see how Renay feels about this one when it goes to her, because I know the rhythm of language is kind of her thing.