I have spent the last week thinking about how I would rewrite all John and Lincoln's scenes to make them more more sympathetic and the guilt Lincoln feels on John's accidental death way more heartbreaking. That is a Bad Sign when I want to redo the work a writer has done and FIX IT. I'm an extrapolator from canon moment, not it fix-it person. BUT THE WHOLE THING WAS A MESS.

I had some feelings about Mack and Daisy in this episode and also the writers and their obsession with writing high stakes that are super lazy. That'll probably go up on Tuesday, filled with me screeching about tension.